Day 4
when you left, he spoke only in metaphors,
when you left, he told me he was drawing maps to you,
when you left,
I wondered where his compass heart would point.
Roaming girl,
you are the wildest path through the forest.
Update: continued from Day 4
(Day 5)
when he knew you were leaving,
he confessed to faulty cartography and tried again, topographically this time.
he mapped out your mountaintops,
reset the scale to account for the distance between your heart and his
When you left,
he realized how thin the air was at this altitude.
Girl! You are absolutely amazing.
ReplyDeleteYour talent and the incredibly moving way in which you write never cease to amaze me. I love this whole 30 days of poetry thing. It's kind of been what I look forward to at the end of the day: reading something wonderful from the bottom of someone's heart and realizing that she is one of the best people that I know. You are beautiful, and your writing is beautiful, and I just hope you never stop.
Love you lots!
Thank you, lovely! I'm so glad you've found me here. You are a light.
DeleteRoaming girl,
ReplyDeleteyou are the wildest path through the forest.
This is an amazing line. I love all I have read here. My girl, you have talent.